Dr Buttery's letter (
Dr Buttery's main point centers on the question of how findings of such an analysis can be effectively presented to policy makers and community members. An effective presentation should be a top priority for scientists preparing manuscripts for dissemination to nonscientific audiences such as policy makers and community members. Mapmakers have a special challenge: they are never certain who will use the finished product and for what purpose. If I were to rewrite my article for an audience of policy makers, I would reduce both the complexity and volume of quantitative jargon to an absolute minimum, while assuring the audience that the findings and conclusions are scientifically valid, backed by statistical analysis, and not merely the author's opinions based on visual interpretation of the maps alone.
The subjective nature of visual interpretation was demonstrated by the first four maps in the article (Figures
For nonscientific audiences, including policy makers, the following language may help interpret
A unique advantage of maps is that they simplify and illustrate patterns not discernable through data tables. Maps have visual impact; mapmakers want map readers to remember the phenomena they see in a map, and they often want to encourage appropriate action. By using spatial statistical techniques to identify geographic patterns, mapmakers use additional information in the data set — spatial information — to ensure that the resulting patterns are not subject only to the interpretations of the map reader. Mapmakers are responsible for explaining their methods but should understand that audiences vary in their need for details.
Dr Buttery's letter reinforces a key point for mapmakers and others who present data in written or graphic format: know your audience, and present and interpret your results in a way that maximizes understanding. I thank Dr Buttery for his insightful comments.
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